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Thursday, November 24, 2011

Hark!

Hark! Look at the park,
very pretty in the sun's ray,

Hark! Look at the magnificent lark,
flying over the seaside bay.

Hark! Look at the tree with brown bark,
its leaves shine in the sun of may,

Hark! Look at that mark!
Mum won't be very happy today!
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10 comments:

  1. BachiNovember 24, 2011 at 7:09 AM

    Excellent Pandu. Keep writing

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  2. DivyaNovember 24, 2011 at 8:09 AM

    Beautifully written, Gayathri! Keep writing! I loved the rhyming words and the fun ending of the poem. Lots of love - Divya aunty

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  3. RashmiNovember 24, 2011 at 8:38 AM

    Super cool stuff, keep it up Gayathri..would love to read more of these..

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  4. Sudhir VarmaNovember 24, 2011 at 9:01 PM

    Hey, Gaya3

    Great work! Keep writing!

    Love,

    Sudhiammaman

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  5. Satish VarmaNovember 24, 2011 at 10:02 PM

    Gaya3,

    Wonderful to see you write. Just like your mom! I too loved the ending couplet the best! If at all you get lower marks, write a couplet - that will surely make your mom very happy!

    Satishammaman.

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  6. Vijaya.November 24, 2011 at 10:11 PM

    Very nicely written Gayatri!
    Keep it up.

    -Vijaya aunty

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  7. AhmedNovember 25, 2011 at 6:25 AM

    Nice one, Keep it up.

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  8. VidyaNovember 25, 2011 at 8:40 PM

    Thank you everyone for your nice words!!

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  9. Kalpana K.November 25, 2011 at 11:06 PM

    Awesome imagination & wonderful play of words ! Way to go, young poetess !!

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  10. kalpanaJanuary 13, 2012 at 10:42 PM

    excellent job!!I loved it sharp,precise and beautiful!!!

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